Just a quick poem

TreyeMe · 07-23-2006, 10:24 PM

People think its all just a game, grow up go to school live life while thinking like a fool
its all laid out for each and every soul but what they lack is a life of their own
weather you want to admit
ill just go ahead and spit it
because your no more than an ignorant drone
sent from the heavens youll fall from your thrown
into the pits of hell cause you couldnt grasp your own
they control your thought through the television and paper too
so dont think for a second that it isnt biases
cause it isnt about racism
its all about classicism
and all about scandals
its nothing more than Houdini
trapped under water with some anvils
hell make it to the top
and youll never know how
cause all you saw was the surface
once their ready they are going to attack
its been planned for years and we are the last step
so get ready you fools you push yourselves to your death
even you who think your on top cause you drive a nice car
and your wife is damn hot
but youll know when your time comes and the pendulums swings
your just a pawn they used to get to the king
i wish the best for these souls that could have been saved
but its people like you that put them all in their grave
if you still dont get what Im trying to say
they have already gotten you in some kind of way
I tried so hard to live on my own
but in the end your numbers have grown

just let me know what you think, dont be to harsh

peace

yustr · 07-24-2006, 08:59 AM

I like it, especially the analogy of Houdini below the surface, allowing us to see only what he wants us to see, while he manipulates the world as he sees fit.

07-23-2006, 10:24 PM	#1 (permalink)
TreyeMe Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: NY Posts: 83 OS: VISTA	Just a quick poem People think its all just a game, grow up go to school live life while thinking like a fool its all laid out for each and every soul but what they lack is a life of their own weather you want to admit ill just go ahead and spit it because your no more than an ignorant drone sent from the heavens youll fall from your thrown into the pits of hell cause you couldnt grasp your own they control your thought through the television and paper too so dont think for a second that it isnt biases cause it isnt about racism its all about classicism and all about scandals its nothing more than Houdini trapped under water with some anvils hell make it to the top and youll never know how cause all you saw was the surface once their ready they are going to attack its been planned for years and we are the last step so get ready you fools you push yourselves to your death even you who think your on top cause you drive a nice car and your wife is damn hot but youll know when your time comes and the pendulums swings your just a pawn they used to get to the king i wish the best for these souls that could have been saved but its people like you that put them all in their grave if you still dont get what Im trying to say they have already gotten you in some kind of way I tried so hard to live on my own but in the end your numbers have grown just let me know what you think, dont be to harsh peace

07-24-2006, 08:59 AM	#2 (permalink)
yustr Asst. Manager, The Conversation Pit Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Connecticut shore Posts: 6,049 OS: XP Pro My System	I like it, especially the analogy of Houdini below the surface, allowing us to see only what he wants us to see, while he manipulates the world as he sees fit. __________________ If there are lawyers or politicians involved, logic may be a very poor tool for reaching a conclusion.